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Ohmai - Poetry?
 By Cactiberry. 21/09/09, 12:55 pm
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| We don't have a thread for this, so imma spam my poems! =D
Note: Most of these are crap, as they were written during boredom in classes~
Critique is welcome, comments are love.
Warning: My poetry ranges from retarded to somewhat thoughtful.
Poem 1
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There once was day
and now is night
Within the darkness-
Within the light.
Two is one,
one is two,
within the lie
Lies the truth.
The world is going up
it's going upside down
I wonder what is making
This dying world go round.
Poem 2
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“Goodbye”
What a foolish word.
It only brings pain
I don't want to say “Goodbye”
Because it means,
“The End.”
Poem 3
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Left, right,
Up, down,
where's here?
Where's there?
Where's anywhere?
I want to run,
I want to hide.
Where's the exit?
Over there.
“ Welcome to the Monochrome Ward.”
(Actually from Maddi's poem =D -stolen-)
Poem 4
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Goodbye, hello,
the truth, a lie,
Dreams, reality,
beginning....
End.
Poem 5
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How strange.
This silence.
Don't you think
you should end it?
Poem 6
Paper
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I once had some paper,
In the shape of a minnow
And one day in winter,
It flew out the window.
My papery fish,
Was all covered in scales
It flew out the window,
and into the gale.
My poor little fish
Flew to and fro
It flew and it flew,
But had nowhere to go.
My poor little fish,
Was carried in on the wind.
My poor little fish...
Flew into the bin.
By Elizabeth Cole
Poem 7
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I see her everyday
that strange little girl
sitting in a corner
alone in her own world
Strange girl in the corner,
what is your name?
Why are you all alone,
every single day?
Sitting with her hands clasped
her head in the clouds
I think of the strange girl
Alone in her own world.
Everyone ignores her,
for reasons I don't know,
Could she have done something wrong,
to make everyone hate her so?
Lonely girl in the corner,
what is your name?
LOL REVEL AT MY CRAPNESS |
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Cactiberry
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Re: Ohmai - Poetry?
By Blooberry. 21/09/09, 12:57 pm
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| GTFO OF MY POEM.
>:C
If I could be bothered i'd post writing. But most of it is spazziness.
oi oi oi, remember 'Ode to Sir Mooglesworth'? |
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Re: Ohmai - Poetry?
By Cactiberry. 21/09/09, 12:58 pm
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| | OF EPICNESS, YES |
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Re: Ohmai - Poetry?
By Guest. 21/09/09, 02:19 pm
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| EPIC CACTI *CLAPS* WELL DONE  |
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Re: Ohmai - Poetry?
By Cactiberry. 21/09/09, 02:20 pm
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| | Thank you, minion. Have a cookie. |
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Re: Ohmai - Poetry?
By mystix-candy. 21/09/09, 02:34 pm
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| You showed me poem 3 once! = D
BUT YOU DIDN'T TELL ME YOU STOLE IT D=
Poem 2 is very true~
It's like when I had to say goodbye to you on Saturday ;A; |
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Re: Ohmai - Poetry?
By Cactiberry. 21/09/09, 02:36 pm
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| Oh yah D:
OMG DEIDEI, WHY DO YOU HAVE SUCH A PHOTOGRAPHIC MEMORY?!
but chyeah, original DUm Dum's.
I know, THE PAIN! I didn't wanna say goodbye D: |
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Re: Ohmai - Poetry?
By mystix-candy. 21/09/09, 02:38 pm
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| DeiDei only remembers important things~
Dum Dum came up with that? It's pretty good y'know~ you might have competition~
Poem 7: The name of the girl is Deidara XDDD |
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Re: Ohmai - Poetry?
By Cactiberry. 21/09/09, 02:39 pm
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| - mystix-candy wrote:
- DeiDei only remembers important things~
Dum Dum came up with that? It's pretty good y'know~ you might have competition~
Poem 7: The name of the girl is Deidara XDDD
Hurrr~
Dum Dum ripped it off Black and White Ward tho~
I'd post my Gallopoli poem, if I could find it~
NO DEIDEI IS MADE OF HOTNESS AND AWESOMENESS, NOT STRANGENESS |
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Re: Ohmai - Poetry?
By Blooberry. 21/09/09, 02:40 pm
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| | /abuses |
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Re: Ohmai - Poetry?
By mystix-candy. 21/09/09, 02:50 pm
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| EEP! so you stole it x 2 !!
even badder D<
YAY DEIDEI LIKES BEING MADE OF HOTNESS! |
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Re: Ohmai - Poetry?
By Cactiberry. 21/09/09, 02:52 pm
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| | Hurrr~ Forgive me? D: |
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Re: Ohmai - Poetry?
By mystix-candy. 21/09/09, 02:54 pm
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| Of course!
omg, once I finish that comic of DeiDei/Pedochu, I shall make a thread of it here XD
ah, better get going to bed...
SOME OF US STILL HAVE 1 WEEK OF SCHOOL ;A; |
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Re: Ohmai - Poetry?
By Cactiberry. 21/09/09, 02:55 pm
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| THANK YOU! ;_;
DeiDei/Pedochu comics FTW!
Yeah, get rested up! (Even though yer exams are over, right?)
Aww, have a good day lovvie! |
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Re: Ohmai - Poetry?
By mystix-candy. 21/09/09, 02:57 pm
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| *hug*
YEAH! the first of many~ =w=
yup, all moxk exams over...so i don't see the point of school for 1 more stupid week =______=
You have a good day too~ *hughughug* 
And we shall continue...TOMORROW! >D |
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