She..a poem

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I am in the process or shall i see WILL be sending my a collection of poems (all my own original work) off to a few literary agents to see if they are good enough to be published

they vary from life, to relationships and world issues....all sorts really

here is one i wrote last year in spring

its one of my faves

She

Her hair is blonde
She’s brunette too
Her eyes are brown
Green, grey and blue

She may be short
She’s also tall
Very large and pretty small
Always laughing, weeping cries
Speaks the truth, and full of lies

She hates to love
And loves to hate
Never argues, so full of debate
Smiling sweetly, curls her lip
Her faith is high, with hopes that dip

Strong in mind, body and spirit
Mentally exhausted, and pushed to the limit
Never looks, she wants to seek
Physically fit, extremely weak
Likes the city, not the crowds
Rather quiet, screams out loud
What is she, who really knows?

Full of yes, full of No’s

The more I write the more it grows
A contradiction from her head to her toes

By bekah. 26/12/07, 02:21 pm

Omgomg ^^
This is really cool~~
I'd publish this, if i were a publisher person :]

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wow OMG ur awesome THANKYOU
thats really sweet of you to say

yays ^_^

By Pyro. 27/12/07, 08:12 am

Quite interesting, says I.

Though, I think where you put the word No's with a capital, it should be changed to a lower case letter. I can't remember if that's correct, but I have a gut feeling it is. :)

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yeah i realised that too when i posted it lolz

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