Punk. By Li-Bai. 11/01/10, 02:02 am |
| Scrawled this down in my notebook at about 2AM this morning. Title is only rough, I don't actually have one for it. Also, I don't know if this is any good or not, but it seemed to flow pretty well when I wrote it.
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He's a punk. There's no denying it.
That black t-shirt, those ripped jeans, all stereotypical, tell-tale signs of a rebel, a delinquent, a stain against the system.
The stories all follow him, you know; he was the one who beat up that guy, or set fire to the school, or;
Did you hear? did you hear? I heard from someone who heard from someone that he's been up to more mischief, I bet he was the one who robbed that store!
Stories, stories. That's all they ever are, you know.
But that doesn't matter, that's all people need. Once they hear the stories, they don't need to know any more.
Now that we've all heard about what a trouble-maker he is, what we see is what we get, there's no need to look any further.
What, you say the stories aren't true? Someone set him up, an easy target, quick to pin him the blame?
Yeah, right. More stories. This one's false though.
As if one person's little tale could change everyones' opinions so easily.
Nice try.
So they take him at face value still and regard him with distaste, or disgust, or contempt. Or anger or pity or fear.
And he opens his mouth to say - but they all scarper away.
But there's no roar.
All that comes out is a quiet......... Don't look at me that way, don't look at me
that
way.
[11-01-10 2AM] |
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Re: Punk. By Cassiel. 11/01/10, 04:03 pm |
| :0 I like it a great deal. |
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Re: Punk. By Guest. 11/01/10, 06:02 pm |
| I KNEW THERE WAS SOME 李白 INTO YOU.
But anyways, nice...Should post it on FP. |
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Re: Punk. By Lexicon. 12/01/10, 01:21 am |
| I like it. 8DD |
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Re: Punk. By Rolly. 12/01/10, 04:34 am |
| That's one hell of a cool poem. Nice. :Db |
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Re: Punk. By Li-Bai. 12/01/10, 06:58 am |
| Oh my! I'm glad you guys enjoyed it, I appreciate it muchly. I haven't written any poetry in a while, so...
- .LaydeeCheiraLeena. wrote:
- I KNEW THERE WAS SOME 李白 INTO YOU.
But anyways, nice...Should post it on FP. Ahahaha. Well actually, 杜甫 is my ancestor, so, you know... maybe it's passed down through the generations? heh. Ooh, don't have FP. So many original ideas, ripe for the picking... trying to avoid that xD; |
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Re: Punk. By Guest. 14/01/10, 06:59 pm |
| - Li-Bai wrote:
- Oh my! I'm glad you guys enjoyed it, I appreciate it muchly. I haven't written any poetry in a while, so...
- .LaydeeCheiraLeena. wrote:
- I KNEW THERE WAS SOME 李白 INTO YOU.
But anyways, nice...Should post it on FP. Ahahaha. Well actually, 杜甫 is my ancestor, so, you know... maybe it's passed down through the generations? heh. Ooh, don't have FP. So many original ideas, ripe for the picking... trying to avoid that xD;
杜甫?!
And I brag about having like, 5% of Mongolian blood in me >_>"
But hey, he didn't know english at that time!
>.>"...Well then, GET FP! |
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Re: Punk. By Olli. 07/03/10, 12:33 pm |
| Wow it's really good! I love how it's written |
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