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Post By Pyro. 01/11/09, 02:51 pm

So we can all see what we've each done, yay! <3

Here're the first three chapters of my yet-untitled story, to get the ball rolling:

CHAPTER 1:


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CHAPTER 2:


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CHAPTER 3:

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NOW GO FORTH, FELLOW NANOWRIMOERS! SHOW ME WHAT YOU GOT! <3
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Post By seraphik. 01/11/09, 02:54 pm

FORTISSIMO

so far, 14,058/50,000.
(also stickied the thread. 8D)

CHAPTER ONE


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Post By Axelinn. 01/11/09, 03:13 pm

@Pyro: I've read all but the last half of chapter three of yours so far, and it was good! 'Rai's rooms sound like mine ^^"

@seraphik: I haven't read much of yours at all (cough only the first paragraph cough) on account of my mother wanted me to go to bed, but that first paragraph really made me want to read more ;__; I think I'll keep this page up on my laptop and read it in bed ^w^

As for me; I've only written about 2,000 words so far (kind of fail compared to the rest of you, but... At least it's past the daily word count >.>"

Stage 00: Prologue
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Also, what I've got so far of:
Stage 01: Jack and Jill
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Post By Stranger. 01/11/09, 03:42 pm

To be fair, I wrote this in 20 minutes since finding out about it, registering and writing madly, but here's the prologue/introduction:
(287 words)

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Let me know what you think, and I'll read the others' when I'm not being blackmailed into sleep. >_>
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Post By Admin. 01/11/09, 03:51 pm

phear mah phail writing:

Dominari Liber!

so far 3236 / 50,000

Chapter One - an invitation

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Post By seraphik. 01/11/09, 06:10 pm

@stranger; love the stream of consciousness stuff you have going on there. C: very descriptive, too. I'M ON TENTERHOOKS.

@alex; LMAO THE LUSTY SWORDFISH. I LOVE IT. sounds great so far! the
delivery company thing is kinda awesome & i'm looking forward to
seeing where you go with this.

@axelinn; very readable! *A* i love the dialogue between bel and asher... sounds like it'll turn out to be a great read. 8D

@pyro; intricate plot! me likey. 8DDD rai's attitude is awesome, haha.
the background stuff was sweet too, it really puts you in the mood to
find out what happens~

GRRR WHY DOES MY TEXT FORMAT SO CRAZILY >8(

FORTISSIMO - CHAPTER 2
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Post By ixi9003. 01/11/09, 08:29 pm

I am totally not posting mine until a) I KNOW it makes sense and b) Until I have made sure I have spelt things like err pieces correct
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Post By Guest. 02/11/09, 03:26 am

I'm Nano-ing the Boob Thesis!!!

Currently no words *sigh*

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Post By seraphik. 02/11/09, 05:14 am

YOU CAN DO IT. 8Db
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Post By Mandie_Chan. 02/11/09, 06:08 am

T_T
How is it all you guys are so good at writing?
I want your mad skills!!!
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Post By Guest. 02/11/09, 06:12 am

seraphik wrote:
YOU CAN DO IT. 8Db

Not without disconnecting the internet I can't. I'm going to get Dr Wicked tonight. The $10US is worth it!

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Post By Selphiroth. 02/11/09, 01:28 pm

@Pyro Fantastic work! I already know a bit of the back stories, it is still wonderful to see it coming into its actual form. Certainly impressed that you managed this quality at SPEED WRITING. I can't even begin to imaging what it's like to be able to write this well in such a short time period.

I love love love the portrait of the brothers' characters. There are so much believable sibling love that is constantly being made aware, without turning right into the ultra sweet territory. Overall it felt like you have really thought out the characters, the world settings as well as paid extra attention on how each one of them would deal with the circumstances in their distinctive way, it came across as a really carefully crafted piece. If anything the only thing I'd be a bit "eh" about is how he tried to explain his situation to Asta by undressing. Maybe Asta don't mind, maybe they are close enough to get away with it, I think personally I would've just GOT OUT OF THERE and not even look to find out why. ^^;; Oh clawed MP3, that made me lol.

Overall a great piece, and I can't wait to see more!

@Seraphik Things that you probably already know - I'm not an international student. I'm less musical than most deaf people. I never had a "normal" high school experience. Because of that, I don't relate to your story or character at all.

Yet I am loving it to bits. I love the bits of witty comments slipped unexpectedly between the lines that made me laugh, I love how lively the characters are, I love the choices of words used that subtly give out characterisation, AND LETHARGIC TURTLE RACE. It's the sort of story that made me wondered what if. What if in a parallel universe, it's possible to have a school life like that? Isn't that just rosy? =)

Well done!

@ Axelinn This is one of those times that a somewhat fomulated story stayed charming and fun to read because of the amount of self awareness shown in it. You are obviously a keen reader, as well as being very genre savvy. It is super delightful to read precisely because of the amount of subtle references, and it's just so lively!

@Stranger I'll wait for more to come. =)


(Others, tomorrow. I need to get on my own NaNo ;ajdfkaj)
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Post By Rikki-Leigh. 02/11/09, 01:34 pm

... KASHFLDHGJASLD YOUR STORIES ARE SO AWESOME GUYS

I need to start writing my own story. ;;

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Post By Ginger Ninja. 02/11/09, 01:34 pm

I feel so bad for not having started mine now. I have a base plots and everything in my head i just dont know how to write it xD TOMORROW!
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Post By Pyro. 02/11/09, 01:56 pm

@Selphiroth-- I don't know how heavily I've implied it in there, but he and Asta' have known each other since they were about five or six, so she wouldn't find it too weird-- on the contrary, she'd probably be feeling more like 'gawd Nab's been so prudish since like the beginning of time', if she was even thinking about that particular issue at that stage. Also, when she reappears later in a slightly less out-there-scenario, I'm hoping it'll become clear that she's reasonably relaxed about that sort of thing. =D
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Post By seraphik. 02/11/09, 02:11 pm

@shelley; askdjflsdk thankyou! ;A; i think that's what i have the most fun with- characterization and development, rather than nitty gritty super detailed plot stuff... it's just a pleasure to write. and i'm glad you're enjoying it so far, even though it doesn't relate to you! >w< CAN'T WAIT TO READ YOURS, BTW. AM WAITING WITH BAITED BREATH.

it's really heartening to see all this feedback on each others work, guys! gives a lot of encouragement to keep going with nano and hit the 50k mark. <333
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Post By Selphiroth. 02/11/09, 02:34 pm

Okay I'm really self conscious, especially consider that usually people tolerate anything but poor grammar. Oh yeah I'm a non writer. >_> (Then there was the whole POSTING IN WRONG THREAD thing. SHAME.)

English Grammar and me... AHAHAHAHAH. Haha. ha. The hardest part is that I can't write without constant editing, as my thoughts comes out in bursts and without huge amount of hack 'N slashing the sentences makes no sense of what so ever.

But NaNoWriMo said it's NaNoDecEdMo right? So I will give it a go. Shall edit properly later.

1982/50000. I think the correct term is I'm a tad behind.

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Post By seraphik. 02/11/09, 05:46 pm

... shelley i think your writing is amazing. you have no reason to be self-conscious at all!
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Post By Ginger Ninja. 03/11/09, 01:16 am

I have started Very Happy
Even if I did start from near the end of the book because that is the part I wanted to write most. Also my plot it completely unrealistic but I dont really care and my writing isnt very good xD

But at least i finally started, 5000 words behind x.x
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Post By sakuramiyabi. 03/11/09, 01:48 am

i has an idea for a story ... something about coinhabiting with mutant ants ...

but it will have to wait till after my exams TwT
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Post By Guest. 03/11/09, 01:58 am

619!

I <3 Dr Wicked.

Warning: Boob Thesis ahead:
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How to scientifically describe a breast?

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Post By Ryans-cupcake. 03/11/09, 07:41 am

2,608 quite behind. I don't think I'm ready to post anything of it yet. But I'll do that soon...
Took me a while to decide on a storrrrry
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Post By Duckeh. 03/11/09, 07:47 am

Ahgh. Will restart after cleaning.
Have started, don't like it... May use it later in the story.
Generally once I start though and it's running smoothly I can pump out a lot.

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Post By Admin. 03/11/09, 07:59 am

I sort of want to write another story...


I'm not happy with how I've written Dominari Liber!

And I have so many ideas. ;A; It's awful - I have so many good ideas but I can't execute them properly.
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Post By JVCA. 03/11/09, 08:04 am

@Alex: D: What's wrong with it? Can I help? If it helps, *I* like what I've read of what you've written so far.
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