Need Critique on this poster i made

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So far complaints have been

Needs bolder colors
OTT
Too cluttered

o_O any ideas for change?

By Xephia. 26/10/09, 05:01 am

I think it's neat! Something to watch out on in posters, though, is how readable the text is. You want the text 'Love to cosplay... meeting new people' in a font/style that can be read from a few feet away/skimread quickly, which means it needs to be very simplistic. The black shadows at the moment are a little distracting ^^;

In order to make it look a bit less cluttered, why not lighten the background to give ti a bit of a border? For example;

Need Critique on this poster i made Azgbc1

Need Critique on this poster i made Azgbc1

(bad example scribbled up is SAI)

And you might want to move the header in a little. Maybe make it smaller, or word it like;

Dunedin South
Cosplay & Anime
Society

I think it'd fit nicer ^^

Buut, I'm no graphic designer =3. Good luck!

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Oh heck you are a life saver! GREAT IDEAS :)
Will take this into account and make another proof and add it here in a bit - i gotta go grab lunch and fix the website (>_> phpbb3 plugin messed it up AGAIN Lol)

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