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[Poem] Star Jump
Post By Wishe. 06/12/07, 02:12 pm

Star Jump

Troubles I feel
In the pit of my stomach
'Failure' rings in my head
I take a deep breath
And close my eyes

JUMP!

And I'm a star
Though only temporarily
My troubles are gone
I feel free
I can smile



A short poem I wrote to cheer up my friend when she was feeling really down and partly inspired by the people doing star jumps outside class. ^^;
Just thought I'd share it. =)
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Post By Auroa. 07/12/07, 09:08 am

Wow that's really nice ^^
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Post By Wishe. 07/12/07, 09:11 am

Thanks! ^^
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Post By Pyro. 12/12/07, 06:49 am

That's really sweet. Very Happy
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Post By Wishe. 12/12/07, 10:06 am

Thank you. =)

Though it kind of made my friend feel even more down at first because she started reading it when I had only written up to the 'JUMP!' part. She thought I was writing a suicide poem. >_<;;;;
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Post By Annabel. 17/12/07, 11:38 am

Awww! <3 I like that it's not ridiculously long with huge amounts of big words and techniques that make everyone's brains switch off. xD
You should try entering Rewrite or something. (: This is so pretty!
And it conjures up mental images of people jumping into space... which I find cute. xD
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