Jen's Poetry~ By Guest. 01/04/08, 10:07 am |
| Ok, so this is from a while back: but you still may be interested.
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Cat Scratch
Cat claws. Scribing flesh. Stinging, Like the blackbirds caw, Breaking brittle air.
The night sky. The cat's eye. A book that can't be read.
The cat emerges from the alley, Running through grasping grass. A vision that can't be seen.
A black streak, A black smudge. A song that will be heard.
A cat.
Strange
Jen stares at fire. Angel or fool? Undaunted. Fire is strange. She is strange.
Jen knows you know. Jen knows what you know. She is in you mind; tabulating memories. She thinks she is afraid. She knows she is afraid.
Jen stares at fire. Fear and fire. Are they the same? Flaming fear and foolish fire; strange.
She is the unexpected twist.
The Outing
Tears like stone footfalls, Pounding Tepid Blood. The sensation of shadows, Dragging.
Tears. Crisp outbursts of fury drip like leaky containers. The sky blinks as lightning dances. Boiling peak behind. Let go.
A crystal benison of tears, Dew drops on grass. In luscious river limbs.
Fool's Glory
Arrived. His face, a shield of white. Scribing bitter, metal memories. Mooing monotone.
A soldier; A child desperate for glory.
An official stamp. She fumbles - heart shattered. Ribbon and steel fall from her grasp; Tears leak. A jigsaw of life, One piece missing.
Butchered. A mail hero?
Fooled. |
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Re: Jen's Poetry~ By Admin. 03/04/08, 11:33 am |
| Hmm. Still love that last one.
I've read all of these before! xD On the guild.
They're awesome! .....Strange is a bit... strange though. xD But I like all the rest! |
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Re: Jen's Poetry~ By Guest. 03/04/08, 12:36 pm |
| :) Thank you~
yeah, like I said: they are from a while back. meh.
bahaha. If Strange is strange, than my authorial purpose has been fulfilled. XD |
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Re: Jen's Poetry~ By The Nerd. 04/04/08, 11:24 am |
| I really like these. I mean, I know more about comic poetry, but from an untutored perspective they're fantastic.
Are you entering the written contest(s)? |
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Re: Jen's Poetry~ By Guest. 04/04/08, 12:21 pm |
| XD glad you like them~!
and probably. Maybe. Depends if I have time. XD |
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Re: Jen's Poetry~ By Kitten Slave. 04/04/08, 01:12 pm |
| mmm, yes, even I like them, and Im not normally a poetry person! |
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Re: Jen's Poetry~ By Guest. 04/04/08, 01:25 pm |
| XD woo-hoo~! I'm glad to hear it. :) |
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