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Post By Admin. 31/01/08, 09:57 am

It's a catch-22
And I'm hanging from a wire.
If I drop now,
will the damages be less?
Or should I wait,
for something to cushion my fall?
I'm stuck between a rock and hard place,
And there's no one I can turn too.

Mmkay, I kind of wrote that one randomly, just now, in 2 minutes. It's kinda bad I know.

A fragile ribbon drapes across my rapt eyes so I am not blinded by appearances.
No longer shall I revere your actions with the awe I once held for you.
I have seen through your veil once and once is enough,
For me to know the lying coward you really are.

Same with that one, random, meaningless, stupid. Most of my poems usually rhyme ;_;

Stay tuned for more! xD
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Post By Admin. 31/01/08, 10:25 am

My old poetry -

This one is in the style of a Villanelle:

There'll be blood on my hands,
And a body by my feet
I'll follow her commands.

In local New Zealand sands,
And in every single street,
There'll be blood on my hands.

Though nobody understands,
It's really very sweet,
I'll follow her commands.

Bounty on my head expands,
Until my mission in complete,
There'll be blood on my hands.

May the pay dollars, pounds or rands,
My operation shall repeat,
I'll follow her commands.

And so my motive stands,
As something oh so sweet,
There'll be blood on my hands,
I'll follow her commands.

And I dunno the style of this:

The hour strikes twelve,
Still no one is there.
A threatening silence,
A flash of black hair.
A turn 'round a corner,
The demise it is red.
A horrifying sight,
A puddle 'round her head.
A sight of uncertainty,
Lays clenched in her fist.
The short silver blade,
That once slit her wrist.

Sonnet:

I stand above these mortals,
And must I say I'm proud?
I tell you with a chortle,
That I made this pollutant crowd.

It's no longer give and take,
For all they do is withdraw.
Soon they'll drain out ev'ry lake
And wipe out all the macaw.

The layer of protection I've provided,
They've pierced in every way.
So finally I've decided,
I'll bring them their last day.

But maybe in the end I shan't,
For people have come to see I can't.
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Post By Pyro. 31/01/08, 10:28 am

I like the ye old English style one. ;) Very dark.
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Post By Duckeh. 31/01/08, 12:52 pm

Nicely written, I like. <333

Really, I dunno what to say, for your age... Tis like- "O_______O HOH CRAP."
For any age, it's great.

The Villanelle poem is love. n.n
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Post By Admin. 31/01/08, 01:17 pm

xD Thanks. I got an A+ on my Poetry assignment.
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Post By Duckeh. 31/01/08, 01:21 pm

Nice! xD
Assignments are fun, teachers don't nag you for anything... Untill it needs to be handed in~ >.>;;
Then your all like "HOH CRAP" && do it the night before!! :3

At least, this is how I operate~ xD
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Post By Admin. 31/01/08, 01:32 pm

xD I do the same sometimes. Although when they don't remind you to do it you can forget.
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Post By Duckeh. 01/02/08, 06:19 am

Exactly!
And when they do remind you... Well you just say you never heard ;DDD
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