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Self Portrait from 6 months ago~!

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Post By Guest. 08/01/08, 10:55 am

yeah.. this was me about six months ago, when my hair was blondeish. I also had red streaks in it and black underneath =3 But around about the time of 'Geddon I dyed it completely black. bwahaha.

So yeah - please critique? I need to figure out what's wrong with her legs.. o_O

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Post By Auroa. 09/01/08, 02:29 am

I like that picture, its a different style - really unique.

The legs, gah, I had drawing that pose myself, this is gonna make it harder to critique =3
You do that better then me that's for sure.

ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm...

I put it in word so I could zoom out and look at the 'whole' of the picture at the same time. I think its more the left leg... it just seems to stand out more for some reason o.O well I'm being helpful aren't I (for some reason) *cough* >.<'

~ and is the left foot meant to be larger than the right?
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Post By Guest. 09/01/08, 04:40 am

xD I know, my style is crazy..

I don't think the left foots meant to be larger, no.. maybe that's the problem.. that or knees don't bend like that. o_O;;

thanks for your help! ^^

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Post By Pyro. 09/01/08, 05:08 am

Knees do bend like that; actually.

I had to lean over someone in a skit once and my knees went that way.
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Post By Kitten Slave. 09/01/08, 01:25 pm

yeah, looks pretty good to me.
The style has a nice flow to it, so that all sits fine.

If you want to be nitpicky, the feet are slightly disproportional - one being slightly larger than the other, this you already know, but until you pointed it out, I hadnt even noticed.

Only other note I can think of is that the left leg (the cat side), where the leg joins the dress, the inside of the leg curves in a manner that would result in the legs joining awkwardly beneath the dress. mmm, it would put the thigh muscle the same width as the calf... am I making any sense? anyway, nitpicking ;)
I think the knees would bend like that based on the foot positions, so that is fine...

oh. lol. Just had another quick pass. The rose hand... The thumb...

Anyhoo, forgive me, I over analyze. It looks good, but you asked for a critique Embarassed
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