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My emo madness poem (April 2006)

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My emo madness poem (April 2006)
Post By Guest. 22/12/07, 10:59 am

Hey this is a crazy poem i wrote quickly one day last year..after some sort of relationship problem offcourse

EMO madness


(i dont know why i called it emo)

I can’t believe what you have made me
When I thought you were the one who’d save me
Instead you used and bruised me inside
The tears leave stains, they have not dried

You cant place happiness in the hand
Of a woman or a man
It only leads to hurt and pain
Because we’re human and all insane


By juliette Suspect *crazy twitch*

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Post By Pyro. 22/12/07, 12:18 pm

I like the last line. :) So true.

The second paragraph reminds me of Kefka from FFVI.

The first reminds me of Vincent. >=3

It's good.
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Post By Guest. 22/12/07, 01:22 pm

yay vincent ^_^

tankage for the reviewage Very Happy

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Post By Pyro. 22/12/07, 01:34 pm

No problem-o, Juliette-age. ^^
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Post By Guest. 26/12/07, 12:45 pm

26th december 2006

do not lean on me
i will not hold you

do not cry to me
for ill be cold to you

do not ask for praise
if you dont think its true

if you do not beleive it
how can i speak comforts to you?

do not wait for me
il be a long while

do not push me away
it wont make me smile

do open your mouth
do speak from your tongue
dont hold it in
what's done has been done


written by bambi (juliette) :study:

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