My emo madness poem (April 2006) By Guest. 22/12/07, 10:59 am |
| Hey this is a crazy poem i wrote quickly one day last year..after some sort of relationship problem offcourse
EMO madness
(i dont know why i called it emo)
I can’t believe what you have made me When I thought you were the one who’d save me Instead you used and bruised me inside The tears leave stains, they have not dried
You cant place happiness in the hand Of a woman or a man It only leads to hurt and pain Because we’re human and all insane
By juliette *crazy twitch* |
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Re: My emo madness poem (April 2006) By Pyro. 22/12/07, 12:18 pm |
| I like the last line. :) So true.
The second paragraph reminds me of Kefka from FFVI.
The first reminds me of Vincent. >=3
It's good. |
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Re: My emo madness poem (April 2006) By Guest. 22/12/07, 01:22 pm |
| yay vincent ^_^
tankage for the reviewage |
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Re: My emo madness poem (April 2006) By Pyro. 22/12/07, 01:34 pm |
| No problem-o, Juliette-age. ^^ |
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Re: My emo madness poem (April 2006) By Guest. 26/12/07, 12:45 pm |
| 26th december 2006
do not lean on me i will not hold you
do not cry to me for ill be cold to you
do not ask for praise if you dont think its true
if you do not beleive it how can i speak comforts to you?
do not wait for me il be a long while
do not push me away it wont make me smile
do open your mouth do speak from your tongue dont hold it in what's done has been done
written by bambi (juliette) :study: |
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